Discussion post- Revising and Refining

I need an explanation for this English question to help me study.

Conduct a self-analysis of a portion of your essay. In your initial post

(due Wednesday or earlier), copy and paste the paragraph of your

Rhetorical Analysis essay that describes your chosen advertisement.

After you have posted the paragraph, explain how you might revise

specific sentences to include more vivid details. Remember, the goal of

this very important paragraph is to provide a picture in words to your

reading audience. Write as though your reader cannot see the ad, and

must rely solely on your description to understand it.